When a forest sheds its leaves,
It’s a seasonal thing,
A periodic dropping of clothes;
An act of self-defence
Against the blow
Of pure, white snow
Dirtied as soon as it touches the brown
soil:
It becomes soiled.
The muddy river doesn’t wash itself
It flows forward
Across the plains, across the hills
Across the cities,
Till dirtied to the core,
It finally loses itself
Into the arms of the waiting ocean stream
One of these days,
A dried up river will be bemoaned,
And a dry forest will be mourned;
Incessant snow freezes over soggy branches
Cold to the touch
Melting as it touches the ground:
A brown floor greedily gulps each melted
drop of cold.
December 17, 2013
© Geetakshi Arora
The imagery is so strong Geetakshi. Its getting stronger with each of your poems. The words seem to be in a conflict with their existence as words. They want to jump out of the text, they want to startle with the acute sense of life in them.
ReplyDeleteGlad you feel this way! I hoped someone would!
DeleteBut I am very happy you did!
This was born out of extreme pain and well, life is filled with a lot of that, isn't it? :)
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Love you back!
DeleteYou are so absolutely right Stuti! She has the mojo of the best poets in the world. You are no less with that "words being in conflict with their existence as words" wow! I did this statement, "They want to jump out of the text, they want to startle with the acute sense of life in them."
DeleteYou are one of the most brilliant poets I've come across in recent times, Geetakshi. Your exemplary use of metaphor and simile leaves a compelling memory. Love and best of wishes for a long and beautiful poetic odyssey. - S
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